The character forms look great! Theres just two minor things that need to be adjusted.
The RP takes place before firestar's arrival into the forest. Therefore Bloodclan was never around until it was formed around the second book. (Correct me if I'm wrong. It's been a while since I have read the series).
Other than that, could you create a seperate topic for either character? It's alright if they are in the same clan, but otherwise they have to be in different topics. It's just for organization; The Windclan cats would go into the accepted Windclan cats board, etc.