Scorchclaw, my hoped for deputy of RiverClan.

Last edited by Bloodstreak on Thu Apr 25, 2013 6:59 pm; edited 1 time in total

Name- Scorchclaw
Age- 28 Moons
Gender- Male
Rank- Deputy
Clan- RiverClan
Color/Description- Scorchclaw is a deep-furred, dark black tabby, with menacing green eyes. He's an average sized cat, with long, thick claws. He uses his black pelt to blend in with darkness in order to catch his prey easily, or find a way to escape a pursuer.
Personality- He has a pretty deep personality. He does what he must to survive. He sticks to his ways, and is occasionally quite stubborn if you ask him to do something new. He's arrogant at some times, and usually keeps a closed mind. Meaning he doesn't think about anything but himself, and his clan, and so on. He loves to fight, and loves the sound of others crying in agony. (Yes, he's a brutal cat.) He rarely makes bad choices, but still chooses his ways, or his leader's ways. He has a strength that he usually doesn't show. He takes advantage of that so enemies let their guards down, then he unleashes it, almost always destroying the other cat. But it mostly works with cats who aren't as determined, or as smart as him. He's a pretty smart cat as well. He's a self-minded cat, but has learned to care about his clan.
Crush- None.
Mate- None.
Kits- None.
Family/History- He was born a kittypet in the horseplace, until his parents grew old and died away. He spent moons wandering the forest until he stumbled across RiverClan. He decided that a decent home with food and water was good for a while.

It looks pretty good to me. ^.^ I would move it, but I'll wait for one of the Administrators to see it so they can add him to the list. ^.^ I'm a bit unsure because of the fact that he doesn't have a warrior name but I think that it's fine...

Hm.. Dat name thingy... Should I change it?

You should change the name into a clan name and otherwise it is accepted

Changed! :D

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