Oceanshade of RiverClan

Subject: Oceanshade of RiverClan Sun Jun 23, 2013 5:31 pm

Name- Oceanshade
Age- 21 moons
Gender- She-cat
Rank- Medicine Cat
Clan- RiverClan
Color/Description- Pure white with light grey flecks peppering her coat, and silver tabby marks. She has dark blue eyes with green flecks.
Personality- She is usually quiet and secretive, and likes to be mysterious. Oftentimes, she'll answer a question with a question, or an open-ended answer that leaves the other cat annoyed at her. However, she stands up for what she believes in, and isn't afraid to challenge somebody who will hurt her Clan. When provoked, she has a fiery personality, and is fiercely loyal to those she loves. She is loyal to both the warrior and medicine cat codes, and wouldn't dream of betraying RiverClan.
Crush- None
Mate- None
Kits- None

Sorry! Is this better?

Subject: Re: Oceanshade of RiverClan Sun Jun 23, 2013 6:27 pm

\"Friskuis wrote:: Hey there! It's a really nice cat, although we'd prefer to have the highest ranked cats played by users who've been around at the site for a while. Simply to know whether the person in charge of the character will be active or not.

Silence wrote:: Usually, Literate Rper's have their posts at a 60 word count(Unless they have writers block). The places that Im not overly concerned about the Name, Age, rank, Clan, Crush, Mate, and Kits. When it comes to judging to see if the user is a Literate RPer, I usually go and look back and check the their RP posts with their other characters. And alot of times I take the most sentences in a bio to see if its 60+ words. If you can show me some more 60+ words in your RP posts ill accept your cat into the Medicine cat position.(Because its one of the requirements to become a High positioned cat)

Sorry but in order to become a High ranked position, you should be a Literate RPer

Subject: Re: Oceanshade of RiverClan Wed Jun 26, 2013 5:18 am

I think your form looks really lovely, although you're quite fresh to the site. The staff will have to discuss the matter before we accept your character. Feel free to create other characters in the meantime, and get engaged in the RPs. Wink

Subject: Re: Oceanshade of RiverClan Wed Jun 26, 2013 11:04 am

Okay, and thanks!