JayieDeputy Join date : 2012-06-26 Posts : 1367 Reputation : 28
| Subject: ~...Tallclaw of Starclan...~ Tue Jun 18, 2013 9:21 am | |
| Name- Tallclaw
Age- 21 moons
Gender- Tom
Rank- Warrior
Clan- StarClan.
Color/Description- He's muscular, and is equipped with a soft but thin light orange fur coat, and sky blue eyes. His claws are a tad longer than just usual, which was probably inherited from past relatives. His tail is quite bushy, and he is quite a good jumper.
Personality- He's a tough cat, and is also quite loyal. He's really kind/caring, and always has a smile ready for the times when needed. He fights for the greater good, in which can sometimes get him in trouble, but he's still an honest lil' kitteh.
Crush- None. Mate- None. Kits- None.
Family/History- All the relatives he remembers from his childhood have passed as he aged, and he has since forgotten about the majority of them. |
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FriskusisStarClan Cat Join date : 2012-01-09 Posts : 3291 Reputation : 68
| Subject: Re: ~...Tallclaw of Starclan...~ Wed Jun 19, 2013 9:58 am | |
| Nice bio and all that, but the fighting with Chaos sort of happened in the future... After the clans moved to the lake. Our past RP was at the lake territories, while we've now moved back in time until before Bluestar's time and all the great leaders were known. Might want to change that part into something else, but other than that it's a nicely done bio! |
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JayieDeputy Join date : 2012-06-26 Posts : 1367 Reputation : 28
| Subject: Re: ~...Tallclaw of Starclan...~ Wed Jun 19, 2013 11:49 am | |
| Erk.... Sorreh! I didn't know whether we had just moved territories in the present, or t ime wapred back or forward... Thanks for the heads up! |
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FriskusisStarClan Cat Join date : 2012-01-09 Posts : 3291 Reputation : 68
| Subject: Re: ~...Tallclaw of Starclan...~ Thu Jun 20, 2013 3:47 am | |
| It's fine. I'm assuming time warped too, although I agree it's kind of unclear. We're RPing this as a completely different story from the one we had earlier though, independent from the story we used earlier.
Anyway, moving this! |
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JayieDeputy Join date : 2012-06-26 Posts : 1367 Reputation : 28
| Subject: Re: ~...Tallclaw of Starclan...~ Thu Jun 20, 2013 8:05 am | |
| Alright, thanks anyway! XD |
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JayieDeputy Join date : 2012-06-26 Posts : 1367 Reputation : 28
| Subject: Re: ~...Tallclaw of Starclan...~ Thu Aug 01, 2013 12:35 pm | |
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