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PostSubject: Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan   Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan EmptySat Jul 13, 2013 8:38 pm

Name: Waveheart
Age: 12 moons
Gender: She-cat
Rank:Warrior
Clan: Thunder
Color Description: Light Gray with darker ear tips, white splotches, blue eyes
Personality: Sweet, Hyper, and Loyal
Crush: None
Mate: None
Kits: None
Family History: Mother was ThunderClan Deputy


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PostSubject: Re: Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan   Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan EmptySun Jul 14, 2013 10:52 am

Hi waveheart you missed a few things in your character bio. Character form here. Please fix it and then you should be set. And also 144 moons is pretty old. Did you mean 14 moons? If so she would be a warrior.
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PostSubject: Re: Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan   Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan EmptySun Jul 14, 2013 11:20 am

Refurbished BIO
Name: Waveheart
Age: 12 Moons
Gender: She-cat
Rank: ?
Clan: Thunder
Color Description: Light Gray with Darker ear tips, brown eyes
Personality: Sweet, Hyper, and Loyal
Crush: haven't Played yet
Mate: Dunno If wanted yet
Kits: none
Family History: My mother was a ThunderClan Deputy
Thx so much for telling me what i did wrong.
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PostSubject: Re: Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan   Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan EmptySun Jul 14, 2013 11:27 am

Ok could you just edit your original bio? Also i will tell you the usual age for different ranks in the clans.
Kit:0-6 moons
apprentice:6-12 moons
warrior:12 and up until elder
elder:Whenever the cat is old and worn out
Did this help at all? Thanks for fixing it!
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PostSubject: Re: Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan   Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan EmptySun Jul 14, 2013 11:28 am

Yes it did and i want to be a warrior
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PostSubject: Re: Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan   Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan EmptySun Jul 14, 2013 11:29 am

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PostSubject: Re: Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan   Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan EmptySun Jul 14, 2013 11:42 am

Ok Waveheart, for one, please don't double post. I know you're a bit new so you don't exactly know... And also, when you want to make an edit to your post, please click the "EDIT" button on your first post instead of posting another one Wink. Thanks! 
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PostSubject: Re: Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan   Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan EmptySun Jul 14, 2013 11:48 am

Sorry XP ! Wont happen AGAin
  MAYBEPROBABLY HOPEFULLY! 

*I have Short Term Memory Loss, or IDIOTITUS not contagus
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PostSubject: Re: Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan   Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan EmptyWed Jul 17, 2013 10:48 pm

Waveheart, please edit your original post with the new one you have made
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PostSubject: Re: Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan   Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan EmptyThu Jul 18, 2013 12:44 pm

Accepted and being moved!
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PostSubject: Re: Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan   Waveheart, Future Warrior (if im accepted) of ThunderClan EmptySat Aug 03, 2013 10:42 am

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