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PostSubject: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyThu Jul 04, 2013 3:41 pm

Create a cat? Cute-little-white-kitten-cats-33887076-500-460
(Minus the yellow looking spots on her tail and nose and replace with white)


Name: Rosekit
Age- 6 moon
Gender- she-cat
Rank- Kit
Clan- ThunderClan
Color/Description- All white and soft with light blue eyes
Personality- Sweet, curious and fun but a bit hyper
Crush- None yet
Mate- None yet
Kits- None
Family/History-  Used to have three other brothers, but they all died during leaf-bare. Now is the only kit in her litter.


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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyThu Jul 04, 2013 3:44 pm

Hey Rosekit! Your form is really well done, but we would prefer that you use this form:
 
Code:
(Picture, optional)
[b]Name:[/b] (Cat name: Do not steal or use cat names that have already been used.)
[b]Age-[/b] (In moons)
[b]Gender-[/b] (she-cat or tom, obviously)
[b]Rank-[/b] (If your a kittypet, rogue, or loner, just put that here.)
[b]Clan-[/b] (If you are a kittypet, loner, or rogue, put 'none' here.)
[b]Color/Description-[/b] (No abnormal colorings.)
[b]Personality-[/b] (No powers.)
[b]Crush-[/b]
[b]Mate-[/b]

 If you have any questions, be sure to pm me or any other staff members, thank you!
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyThu Jul 04, 2013 7:01 pm

Ok no problem! :3 Ill repost my form with that one!
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyThu Jul 04, 2013 11:33 pm

i love your siggy Rosekit ~ <3
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyThu Jul 04, 2013 11:50 pm

Thanks! X3
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyFri Jul 05, 2013 1:18 am

Code:
[b]Kits-[/b]
[b]Family/History-[/b] (List any other Family, or History if needed.)

 

Okay, I am really, really sorry. I messed up big time DX
I forgot to add these two :/
Please forgive me, Rosekit, for asking so much of you, but could you please add these last two parts of the form to your existing one? Thank you so so much... I'm really sorry for that!
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyFri Jul 05, 2013 2:18 am

Oh its no biggie I really dont mind its kindaq fun filling out these forms, its like filling out my second life Smile ok ill redo it X)
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyFri Jul 05, 2013 4:51 am

Hi there! Sorry to butt in, but that's kind of my job. x3 You've got a really nice form, as said before, although for your 'history' part you might want to change Rosekit's mother. An apprentice really can't mother a litter of kits.
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyWed Jul 10, 2013 8:25 am

Ok I updated my form, is it accepted now?
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyWed Jul 10, 2013 12:45 pm

It looks great! Except the minor thing that cats usually don't have gray eyes, I think it's almost ready to be accepted. Kittens usually have blueish eyes, which gradually change into the eyecolour they have as an adult. You probably went with the colours you saw on the image though.

So if you could change that, it'd be great!
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyWed Jul 10, 2013 10:17 pm

Um...Friskusis, not trying to be rude or anything, but Kittens can actually have grey eyes. i've had many kittens with grey eyes in real life. http://www.keepingkittens.com/gray-kitten.html , there's a example right there.Most of the kittens on there have grey eyes. really sorry about saying that Friskusis, i don't wanna sound like i'm trying to be a mod or anything.
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyWed Jul 10, 2013 10:56 pm

Oh dont worry angelheart it's not that big of a deal Smile ill change it
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyWed Jul 10, 2013 10:58 pm

Ok i changed it now is it accepted? Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyThu Jul 11, 2013 10:17 am

Of course! Accepted and being moved. Wink

(Btw, nice siggeh. o:)
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyMon Jul 15, 2013 5:05 am

~Angelheart~ wrote:
Um...Friskusis, not trying to be rude or anything, but Kittens can actually have grey eyes. i've had many kittens with grey eyes in real life. http://www.keepingkittens.com/gray-kitten.html , there's a example right there.Most of the kittens on there have grey eyes. really sorry about saying that Friskusis, i don't wanna sound like i'm trying to be a mod or anything.

Just to clarify: That might be true, Angel, although I'm talking about when this charrie grows up. No cat grows up to have grey eyes. And I'm pretty sure about that. They can have pale blue eye-colours, but I've never seen a grown cat with gray eyes. Not a kitten either, when I think about it. Of course, we do have different takes on this, but for this form I'd prefer for the owner to write the eye-colour of the kit as they grow up. c:

Sorry if I was very confusing. Just trying to point out my view of the case. ;P
And now I'll just leave this thread alone, considering it's been accepted. Sorry for making a fuzz out of things - again.
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PostSubject: Re: Create a cat?   Create a cat? EmptyThu Aug 01, 2013 6:33 pm

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